I have to say, I admire your humble. as for advice can’t it looks perfect to me,
HEY HE IS OUR BELOVED IDEAL
buy a small condo in downtown and rest put in a bank
the reviewer wants you to change 1 the choice of fonts 2 styles applied to fonts 3 position of elements on flyer
very very smartly done , specially the brand on the back of the neck
yeah i did see it very cool summer flyer
contact me and i will email you a preview of a premade one.