I have to say, I admire your humble. as for advice can’t it looks perfect to me,
HEY HE IS OUR BELOVED IDEAL 
buy a small condo in downtown and rest put in a bank
the reviewer wants you to change 1 the choice of fonts 2 styles applied to fonts 3 position of elements on flyer
cooool badge 
very very smartly done
, specially the brand on the back of the neck 
yeah i did see it very cool summer flyer
EnlivenDesigns said+1
For the first one, dubstep: I like it until I hit the text at the bottom (below the header “dubstep”). All the ‘information’ text seems a little boring or it doesn’t quite fit. Not sure if it’s the layout or the font, that I don’t like. Try changing both a bit.
contact me and i will email you a preview of a premade one.
me too , am very affordable
