Halloween flyer from soft to hard rejected why?

Hello guys, my first Halloweenflyer was soft rejected cause the typography and visual hierarchy. I improved it and it is hard rejected by another reviewer.

I became a little crazy now, , what more can I do?

any suggestions?

thnx

The typography is the main problem I think. Maybe make the small text look like it’s stone engraved. And the big title, rework the styling, maybe improve the firey look on the text. I like the idea with the stone and fire, the cold and warm colours. You can get plenty inspiration on text stylings from the photoshop add ons section. Hope that helps.