Are they that bad?
Not only the bad ones are rejected in here… but I think you should consider the typography…. and try to make the shapes more highlighted may be an advantageous too.. im not a pro brother.. hope this would help…...
And frankly speaking I dont like the third one…... I like the other two…..
Any other suggestions?
These are my suggestions bro.. remove the third one… first thing….. then change the font face of the first logo to balance the overall design…......... do the same in the second one in addition to that consider the colors .. I think it’s better to use some attractive colors…....
Can you please suggest for these ? http://graphicriver.net/forums/thread/iphone-clocks-this-should-be-approved-your-suggestions-/65850
I don’t mean to sound blunt… but these do not really look like logotypes.
To me, they look like groups of random shapes placed together to resemble flowers.
I would go away and browse some gallery’s for inspiration on logos. Then give it another shot.
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I can’t tell you what to improve as I think you will surely need to start over and consider looking at totally different concepts. Choose better shapes, Proper typography and definitely suitable colors.
I wouldn’t really class these as logos, there’s still so much more that could be done because at the moment they just look like anybody could put them together, one suggestion I’ll give is work on the fonts, especially in the third design.