im Creating.. my. .own web.. page.. any comment?http://graphic02.businesscatalyst.com/websitemain.png
Well. the only thing that i personally like are the boxes with the portfolio items in it. the background for the portfolio boxes is ok and the download & fee-exit button are ok.
The rest, imo looks home made.
First, dont use the handwritten font for headers, use a clean crisp font, looking at the style of the boxes i would say a font such as PT Sans or Questrial, that direction.
Try not to build your design is frames and boxes, right now its 2 rectangles with a rectangle in the middle and one on top etc. it’s not very attractive this way
check out artua.com to see how it’s done correctly
also lose the header as is again artua
il give you some examples that show that a designer is a designer with a unique website as a first impression, hope these examples and the feedback will help: