Corporate Identity. Improve or leave it?

Hello. Sadly, my corporate identity has not been approved for sale due to quality/silimiarity reson.

Please help me, shoul I try improve this project?

corporate identity preview

its beautiful , I LOVE IT but the ” development manager” in pink very hard read, and if you can make the round star as a dot above ” i ” in ignite.

Hi buddy Your design is very good, but maybe not good enough to be approved. In first place the flower shape in your design is beautiful but it is kind of messy on your layout, changing shape would improve your design, also maybe using more general and coorporative color on your preview, like blue or green would help to give your design a better look. hope you get approved and have many sales.

Regards Pixflow

Thanks for your comments guys!!

I’m gonna start another project, maybe someday GreatPinkFlower will return