Do you like the idea?

Hey! this is my next work, and i wanted to show you how it is at the moment, i know that maybe it’s a lilttle bit “poor” or too simple. Just want to know what you think, and if you help me with some feedback i’ll appreciate it as always, thanks.

way too simple and not very appealing. Anyone with Microsoft Paint could create something similar to this. I think you need to go back to the drawing board.

msaadvertising said
way too simple and not very appealing. Anyone with Microsoft Paint could create something similar to this. I think you need to go back to the drawing board.

Yes, i know but i just wanted to show the idea of the card.

Thanks.

nice concept but too simple.. need more work!!

Nice Idea frnd! I think If you make the text background 3d like then It will improve the look and also think about the background color and increase the padding/white space of the address box. Hope it will help you to improve your design

badhon said
Nice Idea frnd! I think If you make the text background 3d like then It will improve the look and also think about the background color and increase the padding/white space of the address box. Hope it will help you to improve your design

Thanks, do you mean all the text 3d except the address box?

Nyz said

badhon said
Nice Idea frnd! I think If you make the text background 3d like then It will improve the look and also think about the background color and increase the padding/white space of the address box. Hope it will help you to improve your design

Thanks, do you mean all the text 3d except the address box?

No I mean the black background of the text and also the address box not the text. Or you can just play with the text or without the text; who knows what amazing design will come out ! So just take a try. Good luck

badhon said

Nyz said

badhon said
Nice Idea frnd! I think If you make the text background 3d like then It will improve the look and also think about the background color and increase the padding/white space of the address box. Hope it will help you to improve your design

Thanks, do you mean all the text 3d except the address box?

No I mean the black background of the text and also the address box not the text. Or you can just play with the text or without the text; who knows what amazing design will come out ! So just take a try. Good luck

I started to work today and i’m trying to make some 3d effect on the text, looks better? ill appreciate any feedback!

Thanks.

Nyz said

badhon said

Nyz said

badhon said
Nice Idea frnd! I think If you make the text background 3d like then It will improve the look and also think about the background color and increase the padding/white space of the address box. Hope it will help you to improve your design

Thanks, do you mean all the text 3d except the address box?

No I mean the black background of the text and also the address box not the text. Or you can just play with the text or without the text; who knows what amazing design will come out ! So just take a try. Good luck

I started to work today and i’m trying to make some 3d effect on the text, looks better? ill appreciate any feedback!

Thanks.

Not really to be honest. I just don’t think it suits the business card. Again, I would suggest going a different route completely.

msaadvertising said
Not really to be honest. I just don’t think it suits the business card. Again, I would suggest going a different route completely.

Sooo, direct to the trash right? haha