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royalflush says

Hello, I look a couple of tuts for typography and wanna know if this flyer gets approved?

thnx

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royalflush says

And this one :)

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thomask3r says

First I would remove the “love” in the first flyer. It doesn’t quite fit. Second I would consider changing the font. It’s simple and boring. I like your main text, but the info looks dull, even though the placement is alright.

That’s my two cents. Hope they get approved :)

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LuisFaus says

From my point of view, both of the designs are quite flat. I would recommend you to look for design perspective and depth of field within illustrations tutorials. Additionally you can also look for 3D text photoshop tutorials, in which you could also get a hint of perspective and depth.

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royalflush says

thanx both, I give the maintext of the flyers a depth

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