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Got rejected due to popular trend, any ideas to improve the file ?

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Amrhamza says

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This flyer got rejected due to folllowing popular trend , i dont see anything like it on GR, Any ideas to improve the file would be very much appreciated

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Cause says

Maybe included a picture to make it look a little more detailed and eye catching?

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thomask3r says
JacobBoodrie said
Maybe included a picture to make it look a little more detailed and eye catching?

+1

It has nice details, but in the wrong way. It misses something.

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Amrhamza says

i really thank you for your inputs

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flamedidea says
Amrhamza said
i really thank you for your inputs

hi, the design has a cool idea on it, hmm how about the more solid font? for better readability? my first upload also got rejected T_T, also when you fix this flyer will you upload it again? Thanks

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Amrhamza says

yes i will re-upload it but hopefully the reviewer accept it

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360Degrees says

Hello Amrhazma,

Please do not re-upload your file without making serious improvements since that will only make the reviewers work more than they have to.

The design of your flyer is weak and will not sell because the competition is so much better. Have a look at SevenStyles http://graphicriver.net/user/sevenstyles .

What I can say is that:
  • The design is unorganized/chaotic so the content is not easy to read.
  • You use too many different fonts.
  • The background is just a lot of brushes
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    Amrhamza says

    i wont upload it until i improve thats for sure. It has to be chaotic its DEATHMETAL

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