Help me (my flyer rejected)

this is my flyer link please see and tell me how can i improve yourself???

I think some typographic issue…

Focus on the composition of the entire flyer; group the elements better to gain a better focus point of the flyer.

To be honest, I really like this flyer. It’s not kitschy, yet it’s still good and elegant. I think if this main text “Party Night” is more above, over her legs, the whole thing would seem much more cohesive. Btw, girl is hot