i feel very bad :(

please.. help me..

this.. rejected :

2nd rejection some on said.. i change the font. .and .. the… shadow..

and this.. one.. the last i made.. do you think now it will approve?

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Might it be also that the text sounds a bit like a Police sone and the lyrics may be copyright

about this?

than is editable text

Yea, try to submit it without this lyrics.

Apart from that I’m not shure if the shape of this machine is ok. I mean the lens and everything around it. Maybe try to draw this fragment one more time from scratch?

Believe me – reviewers want your file to be the best because it means sales!

friskweb said
Yea, try to submit it without this lyrics.

Apart from that I’m not shure if the shape of this machine is ok. I mean the lens and everything around it. Maybe try to draw this fragment one more time from scratch?

Believe me – reviewers want your file to be the best because it means sales!

tnx..

in some reason im not on.. mood..

cause.. one’s a week i making item.

like.. example.. i submit to day.. i wait until i have a result .. like 3 day’s then it is rejected wait again 3 days .. cause im waiting. and then it alway’s rejected..

anyway. .tnx for suggestion

I recommend you work much more in lens, which seem much more real, maybe give a little texture to the skin of the camera and is just my opinion but choose a better typography much more elegant.

even so, you have to work even more in the shadows.

CarlosViloria said

tnx buddy