In Need Of Advice :-)

I would like to know what you think. To minimal? To basic? Any advice would be appreciated. – http://ow.ly/cfUVB

Thanks!

i think it’s to flat… need a little bit depth…

• need more whitespace
• use grey text instead the heavy black
• tune the green text’s color to the picture’s green
• fit the copy to the margin
• increase the space inbetween the headiles and th bodycopy
• there is a minor bug with the separator motif (left bottom corner)
• i would move the scissor onto the right side

happyfine said
i think it’s to flat… need a little bit depth…

Can you explain what you mean? As far as needing more depth.

dekurvajo said

• use grey text instead the heavy black

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I didn’t think to use grey text instead of black.

dekurvajo said

• fit the copy to the margin

Thanks for the feedback!

i personally love it very easy on the eye, but the picture is too green.

Fit the copy to the margin: im atlking about fitting, sorry if my english is not the best. So, you have a margin around the page, right? then you have gaps as well. Those distances should be consequent with each other. The Margin has to be bigger than the gaps. Let say the margin is 1 unit on the left and 1 unit on the right 1 unit on the top, and a bottom is… let say 2 units. But for example, the contact information is not follows the 1 unit margin. The lines (i can not clearly) but seems like also not consequent.

Regarding the strong green picture, i think thats ok. Thats a conscious dramatizing and i like it personaly…

dekurvajo said
Fit the copy to the margin: im atlking about fitting, sorry if my english is not the best. So, you have a margin around the page, right? then you have gaps as well. Those distances should be consequent with each other. The Margin has to be bigger than the gaps. Let say the margin is 1 unit on the left and 1 unit on the right 1 unit on the top, and a bottom is… let say 2 units. But for example, the contact information is not follows the 1 unit margin. The lines (i can not clearly) but seems like also not consequent.

Regarding the strong green picture, i think thats ok. Thats a conscious dramatizing and i like it personaly…

I see your what your saying. Your English is fine by the way. I just need more clarification on your statement. Thanks for the help!

Amrhamza said
i personally love it very easy on the eye, but the picture is too green.

Thanks!

To much of the design is dedicated to the image, try reducing the area it takes up.

I would also work on the whitespace of the design as a whole, give elements more room to breath. Also improve the line-height and colour of the text areas.