is it ready for upload?

Hey, I’ve been working on a different flyer and just wanted your feedback on how to improve it:

Here it is: http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3527/squishs.jpg

squizmo said
Hey, I’ve been working on a different flyer and just wanted your feedback on how to improve it: Here it is: http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3527/squishs.jpg

I think it’d be a good idea to change the background and the badge since they look a bit old-fashioned.

=)

graphicmind said

squizmo said
Hey, I’ve been working on a different flyer and just wanted your feedback on how to improve it: Here it is: http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3527/squishs.jpg

I think it’d be a good idea to change the background and the badge since they look a bit old-fashioned.

=)

thanks, so let’s try like you said

yes, i changed the badge and background.. also it will have many color options.. is it ok now?

new link: http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/8606/squish.jpg

Honestly I don’t think this is ready. To me it looks just like a background with some text on top. The badge doesn’t really fit the background. The type is too simple. There’s nothing really to grab my attention there and it just looks a bit off.

You could give it a try, but I don’t think this would get accepted.

Cheers

Chris

thanks, yeah it’s been accepted

Nice! I like the changes you make to the badge. Good luck with the sales:)

Cheers

Chris

Nice that it got accepted! =)