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Logo Rejected_Need improvement.

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BDdesigners says
http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4420/previewnk.jpg

Please help me to improve it for being approved.

The Reviewer’s comments is: need a little bit improvement.

Thanks

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quickandeasy says
Moved to Item Discussion.
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chrisatlemon says

I think you need to work on the typography. I don’t think the serif font is the right choice, and also it spacing and kerning isn’t ideal.

Also think about placement of the words in relation to the logo image, make sure that both have room to breathe but that they still seem connected as one item.

Cheers

Chris

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BDdesigners says

Now I change it like this:

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/708/previewkr.jpg

Please advise…

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xstortionist says

Just a poor logo design that lacks a good concept.

Typography isn’t good either.

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chiccosinalo says

Sorry for previous link. http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/2707/previewlc.jpg
you need to give the font a well balance with the icon the text seem to be very small, i suggest if you tighten up the company name and or remove the word “name” to remain with company just to make the logo look a bit compact,

hope this helps.

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