Need help to improve it

This is got rejected don’t no why could any one help me to find out that reason And here is the template preview image

i can do it on Microsoft word.

The idea is fine, it just needs refining and improving, the typography and parts of the layout. Colours could be a bit better too.

Thanks for the help any idea what will be better font for it I am thinking of bebas and aller

ToivoMedia said
The idea is fine, it just needs refining and improving, the typography and parts of the layout. Colours could be a bit better too.

It’s not just the font though, it’s the typography in general that needs to be improved.

@Amrhamza Try and be a bit more constructive, comments like that don’t help anybody.

Simanto Work on the typographic elements as a whole, improve upon their alignment and line heights.

It’s also very rare for Envato to accept flyers that are minimal. Try to add a bit more to the design, whether that be colours, images or textures.