Second logo soft rejection =/

http://oi47.tinypic.com/241juyb.jpg

This item needs some modification before being accepted to the marketplace.

1-Color Print Version: Please include a version for 1-color printing. This should be black and setup in the following manner: C=0,M=0,Y=0,K=100.

Tagline /Tagline Too Small: Please include a tagline/slogan line on all variations of this item. If you have already included a tagline, please make sure that it is large enough and will not cause any readability concerns when viewing or printing the logo in small situations.

Color Version/Variation Recommended: Most buyers will be looking for a color logo. Consider adding color to this item (or a color variation) to make it more appealing to buyers.

Fine Details: Elements of this design contain very complex or fine details. When the logo is viewed/printed in small situations, these fine details may pose a visibility/bleed problem. Consider simplfying the design a bit or making smaller lines a bit thicker to avoid these issues.

Design Too Simple: The graphic element is a bit too simple. To safeguard this design, consider adding details or making the design a bit more complex.

Ok, so, what of this reason fits to my logo?

I guess the tagline would be hard to read in “small situations”.

mne po etoj pri4ine otklonili 3 logo no sej4as oni v portfolio. Zdelaj vse 4 pynkta, kotorue napisanu zdes’. ( seryjy versijy zameni 4ernoj – C=0,M=0,Y=0,K=100) ( 4itaemost’ slogana dol*na but’ ly4we) ( cvetnue variantu zdelay ewe) ( poloso4ka vnizy logo sliwkom malen’kaja – pridymaj 4to to) Yda4i,bro!

Good Luck!

@djjeep

spasibo tebe druziwe za pomow

@nexion

yeap, you’r right mate

@dzincstudio

sorry for this and thanks!

some changes http://oi49.tinypic.com/fozd1.jpg

TBH? I really don’t see a reason for this logo to even be considered as a Graphicriver item.

It’s just a simple rectangle. I don’t want to sound harsh but you should put a lot more work and effort into your designs, making a meaningful shape instead of making a 3 minute logo.

I hope you take my comment on the positive side as this will only make you a better designer.

EladChai said
TBH? I really don’t see a reason for this logo to even be considered as a Graphicriver item.

It’s just a simple rectangle. I don’t want to sound harsh but you should put a lot more work and effort into your designs, making a meaningful shape instead of making a 3 minute logo.

I hope you take my comment on the positive side as this will only make you a better designer.

im not agree with your post, but thanks for reply!

yeah, finally logo approved!

Todik said
yeah, finally logo approved!

Congrats! Good luck with sales mate