should this be approved?

Hello, after 3 months practice i want to upload this flyer. Can it be approved or rejected again. the pics are high quality. Hope you can help me. thnx

wooow it looks awesome.. but I I think you should consider the typography, specially the white color text in the top most area and the information. I suggest you to give a speail highlight over the word “Night club” since it must be crafted out… The over look design seems brilliant to me…..... and I like if the contrast of the outer is a bit high…... any way Im not a pro just a beginner… I commented as I feel…. and I think the typography must be considered….............. Font styling , font selection must be focused…

“Juli” myst be “July” also I think….... and take the text a bit upper is suitable too as I feel.. dont know for sure bro….. hope it would be helpful to you

thnx anchor point that you like it. Typography is not my strong point so thnx for your advice

Sorry man this doesn’t have a high chance.

- You need more effects in there

- Work on typography, currently not pleasingly positioned.

- Nothing special going around (sorry not trying to be rude)

- Good luck.