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Soft Rejection: I need some feedback plz.

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Amrhamza says

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Your item Country Music Event Poster Flyer isn’t quite ready for GraphicRiver. This is the reason given by our item inspector:

Your submission isn’t up to the standard of quality that we require.

You will need to consider putting more work into the composition (Balance, whitespace, hierarchy, color, depth, simplicity) as well as more work into the typography.

You need to raise the quality of the graphics used.

I don’t know what to do.

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peerforest says

cant see your design dude.

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Amrhamza says

whay do you mean ? I can see it posted in my browser

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Amrhamza says
here is the direct link http://i.imgur.com/0scRM.jpg
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themeDNA says

Work on the balance of the design, the entire layout could be improved. Use white-space more effectively.

Also, the individual elements of the design do not flow very well. They look as if they are dropped onto the page without much thought.

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ToivoMedia says

I agree with Mythic. I would rework the composition. Also using the same photo 3 times doesn’t look good.

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simonswiss says

I like the Rocking the World title, but the guitar and the hat look very weird and kinda floating on top of things.

Maybe try to reposition them and add a pressed effect with transparency so they look like they belong to the design more..

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