[Soft Rejeted] Need feedback for Logo.. Please help

reviewer said – This logo is slightly too basic and doesn’t carry a strong enough concept to execute the idea. The concept needs some further refinement to make a stronger design The design needs further refinements to the layout and balance of the design.

Then I’ve worked on it and come up with this result – http://i1256.photobucket.com/albums/ii489/CSO-2012/preview.jpg

Need feedback before re-submit it.

Thank you

Looks much better!

Just change the title font and I think your good to go

btw, your bottom right slogan looks a bit cut off…

Good concept! The top corner page of the black one doesn’t look as sharp as the other corners of the other ones, unless you wanted it like that. But other than that, looks good.

CreativeSource_online said
Hello friends one of my logo is soft rejected here is the preview- http://2.s3.envato.com/files/28432346/preview.png

reviewer said – This logo is slightly too basic and doesn’t carry a strong enough concept to execute the idea. The concept needs some further refinement to make a stronger design The design needs further refinements to the layout and balance of the design.

Then I’ve worked on it and come up with this result – http://i1256.photobucket.com/albums/ii489/CSO-2012/preview.jpg

Need feedback before re-submit it.

Thank you

Beautiful improvements, I think that you could change the font of the main text and make some little adjustment with the leading and tracking. Looks good!