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[Soft Rejeted] Need feedback for Logo.. Please help

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CreativeSource_online says

Hello need suggestion about my soft rejected logo. Here is the massage from reviewer-
“With simple shapes, the rendering has to be perfect with a considered use of proportion and geometry. The font needs to match the shape and the design must be balanced and aligned properly.

The buttons have to be different to PS as it’s a copyright design.”

Here is the preview-
http://3.s3.envato.com/files/30307167/game-logo-template-preview.jpg

I’ll update the buttons but confused about font and others. Thank you

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graphicspencil says

Hello need suggestion about my soft rejected logo. Here is the massage from reviewer-
“With simple shapes, the rendering has to be perfect with a considered use of proportion and geometry. The font needs to match the shape and the design must be balanced and aligned properly.

The buttons have to be different to PS as it’s a copyright design.”

Here is the preview-
http://3.s3.envato.com/files/30307167/game-logo-template-preview.jpg

I’ll update the buttons but confused about font and others. Thank you

You need to change your fonts, as your symbol is circular so find some nice circular font but not to much circular. Also make the symbol of logo near to the logo name. Also vary color little bit more. You design is nice, just think about different button style as these buttons are of the actual product so think something different then this.

good luck:)

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DarkstarDesigns says

the solid colours loog good, but the coloured version looks a little weak it does not pop enough need some highlight to make it really pop. but the idea is great just need to be taken to the next level!

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CreativeSource_online says

Thanks for those helpful comments.

I’ve worked on it a little, and here is the preview-
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Hey guys… need feedback, Please.

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themeDNA says

The second logo’s font is much better then the first.

I would remove the gradient from the thumb-stick and try to improve the general shape of the controller; it currently does not look like one at a glance.

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CreativeSource_online says

Thanks :)

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