GraphicRiver

Work on Anatomy of Character?

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neopeaks says

=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission ===

1) Unfortunately the quality of your file does not meet the high standards we have here thus we cannot approve the item at this moment.

2) You have an interesting concept but you could work more on the anatomy of the character.

Have you seen the quality of other work they accept into the graphics section? Anatomy? Really?

Here is a link to the illustration… http://s3.amazonaws.com/data.tumblr.com/tumblr_m060iiM7Fv1rq1chto1_1280.png

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aleluja says

Long legs maybe? And wider shoulders wouldn’t be bad, since he is very masculine. But don’t take me for granted, I’m no expert.

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chrisatlemon says

I am by no means an illustration expert. But it also strikes me that the legs are very long, thin and far apart.

Cheers

Chris

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iamthwee says

I’d also agree with the above. That being said the cube effect you have going on probably exacerbates the anatomy issues, but I guess that is just the style.

Good luck though, that cubism effect seems to be all the rage at the moment.

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aleluja says

And one more thing from me, I’m not sure what he’s holding, a bottle? He’s an alcoholic?

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GraficAndMedia says

I think he means the face. Look at the size of the bottom area of the head.

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