GraphicRiver

Working on my first logo!

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xstortionist says
Nyz said
Final \\

good luck!

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joemartins says

“well…your pc can be fixed via USB ”
Hahahahah
You should put this as a slogan!
Just kiddin’
I really liked the USBCleaner (last version). But I still think you can work on some colors… I don’t know… d:

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ShahX says
joemartins said
“well…your pc can be fixed via USB ”
Hahahahah
You should put this as a slogan!

Hahahah xD

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Nyz says

=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission === The illustrative part of this logo is quite large compared to the text, consider ways to balance the text/font with the illustration to make a harmonious layout.

I think they wated to say that the text is quite large? :S

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xstortionist says
Nyz said
=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission === The illustrative part of this logo is quite large compared to the text, consider ways to balance the text/font with the illustration to make a harmonious layout. I think they wated to say that the text is quite large? :S

keep workin on it brother!

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Nyz says

Better?

\\

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xstortionist says
Nyz said
Better? \\

yep!

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Nyz says

This File Requires Some Improvements / Fixes

We would like to thank you for your submission but are, unfortunately, unable to approve it at this time as it does not meet our current quality requirements. Please continue reading as we’ve explained why we’ve declined your submission.

=== Why We’ve Declined Your Submission === 1) The ‘pill’ shape is way too big compare to the super tiny usb. The USB will hard to be seen or become blurry in print.

2) Unfortunately I cannot accept this file because the main design is not aesthetically ready for logo templates. The shapes, drawings, colors combination, choice of font, design and the overall concept still required improvements and refinements.

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TommusRhodus says

Also the USB logo is drawn quite badly, look at the connection ‘branches’, the stroke gets wider at the bottom and looks unprofessional to be frank.

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Nyz says
TommusRhodus said
Also the USB logo is drawn quite badly, look at the connection ‘branches’, the stroke gets wider at the bottom and looks unprofessional to be frank.

this is done on purpose.

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