It is rejected again.
Here it is. What is your feedback.
Sorry Flash-Bob I don’t know what to say coz for me it’s looking good enough to get approve. It’s clean & simple with nice work on text styles. Well wait for someone else to guide you on this but nice work. Good Luck
What did they say when it was rejected? The thing that stands out to me is the “Club Party” type could use some work. The “yoursite” is also very close to the bottom, might want to bump that up a bit.
I would work on the center text, make it much larger so it overlaps the frame and capitalize the ‘p’ in Party. The web address at the bottom should also be vertically centered a bit better.
I would also reconsider the model used for the centerpiece image. The fact he is looking away, and that there is a random hand on his back, makes the image seem completely out of place.
They said “Your upload must be a unique concept”.
put some woman in a bikini to make it more unique, since it has higher chances of being approved that way.
I think it’s better to use some kinf a textured pattern in the bottom rather than pure purple color…. I dont know for sure as Im nto an expert.. but your work looks really really really really good for me
Looking good – although having just the one hand appearing on the man’s back is a bit strange – it’d be clearer if there was one the other side too. Liking the doves!
They really said:” your upload must be a unique concept”?!
wow… I mean, there are like 600 flyers with half nude babes online here – the part about “unique concept” kinda makes me laugh.
i think ita good enough to get approved. And hey, in case it gets rehected again, just put some sexy girls on it, and BOOM – there you go